Hi Happy, Another of your poems popped up on Read and Review. So here I am to review your.

Do you hear me!  (E) Just me screaming again. #2280927 by Happy to write

Title and appearance on the page. Your title almost scared me off. Clearly, this is a rant.

Form A poem in 22 lines, free verse.

Texture, rhythm, word choice, and sonics This read like what it looks like, a list of complaints. There are a few typo errors, L9 yo - you, L10 real - really, L11 Your - you're L16 Comma after you, your should be you're. Lastly, Comma after too, in L17. You lose the impact without those commas. If this were mine, I'd leave out L19 and L20 (this is already apparent)

What I liked Your freedom in just letting it all out. This was fun to read.

~~Tink

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