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 Dear Diary  [13+]
A young boy steals the diary of a weird dead girl...
by Jonathan Fore
Review of Dear Diary  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is a great short story, full of suspense, mystery, horror and scary elements. A
Jacob Winters was nine years old and stole the dairy of a dead girl. In the touch of that dairy, he was intimated that what was wrong would happen soon.
In the beginning, none believed him. But, after several advanced accidental information, they started to accept. That was very much exciting and could create anxiety.
The writer shapes the story superbly. As a reader, we become obsessed. So, the readability is excellent.
Write on!
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