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First impression: Short and "Sweet", how can I resist.

Form 10 Line poem, made up of 5 rhymed, tetrameter couplets.

Texture, rhythm, word choice, and sonics. This poem reads aloud fluidly. Words gloves, grubby, sleepy cat, and crown, brought a little interest to the piece.

Suggistions This is a lovely Spring poem without any surprise. Crafted perfectly but it pretty much says what all sweet spring poems say. I wonder how much more interest you could bring to this piece with an earthworm poking up its head or anything that might surprise the reader? Don't get me wrong, I'm sure I have dozens of "sweet spring" poems in my portfolio and maybe I too should go back and rethink them to add just a little twist or surprise. This is your poem. The ideas here are just one person's opinion, use what is helpful and ignore the rest.

Conclusion I enjoyed reading this delightful Spring poem only 2 days into the Equinox and the first day of Spring 2023 when the sun came out and it wasn't pouring rain. Thank you for this enjoyable read.

~~Tink

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