Hi Sue, Read and Review is going to give me a bunch of GPs for reading on your delightful

Everything Autumn   (E) Poem about Autumn #2261002 by Sumojo

Win/Win for me.

*tulipsv*First impressionI did even notice the title, just your screen name and the very short poem with variable lines. Of course, I'd read it. But on second glance, the title does have a little unexpected view on just another autumn poem that would attract the random reader.

*tulipsb* Form Free verse with cleverly placed rhyme.

*tulipsv* Texture, rhythm, word choice, and sonics. This piece has a fluid rhythm that is easy on the ear. Sounds like lyrics to a song. You have all the commonly used words when writing about autumn and yet the way you say them sounds fresh.

SuggestionsI can't offer anything for improvement.

*tulip* Conclusion It just turned Spring 4 days ago, so a changing of the season poem is appropriate to read at this moment even though it is a different season. I loved how the rhyme was woven within the piece.

Thanks for the enjoyable read.

~~Tink

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