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 July  [18+]
Poem about the sky
by August Ivy
Review of July  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It is indeed brilliant poetry. Overall, it creates a good impact, but two remarkable things make me obsessed.
One of them is creating the perfect image of the hot and humid scenarios which can often deen in July.
Everybody feels disgusted with the author due to his attitude but one. But that person died. That makes the teller sad as the person was the source of inspiration.
Excellent writing skills. Go ahead.

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