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Unlucky  [13+]
in love, in finances, in life
by Dave
Review of Unlucky  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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That poetry is a Chaim of two ideal Limericks. Each stanza is independently a perfect Limerick. There is no doubt about it. But the chain of these two stanzas is complementory to each other and creates a different dimension in this poetry.
As the ideal Limerick, here comedy is the first genre, which is perfect. In the humour, the poet shows us how we invite our unfortunate due to our greediness. If you try to continue your life with those bad habits, you must pay heavily, ultimately.
It is indeed a great lesson. We will remain grateful to the poet for this significant creation.

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