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 My Neighbor’s Yard  [E]
He does his own yard work
by Prosperous Snow celebrating
Review by Tinker
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Niva, Now this haiku "My Neighbor's Yard" was a delight to read. Found it on Read and Review. Yes, I'm commenting again.

I can never passover a haiku. They are fast and clear and in your case, lovely. Obviously, you don't just write 5/7/5 but display an understanding of juxtaposing L3 with an entirely different image

Not much more to say, this was an enjoyable read.

~~Tink



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