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 Service Dog BELLA: I miss you.  [E]
About my service dog Bella my friend and helped who I miss very much.
by dogpack:saving 4 premium: DWG
Review by Tinker
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Dogpack, Your "Service Dog Bella" came up on Read and Review. It's an old one but I am here to share my thoughts.

First Impression: You get the sympathy and dog lover reader right off. Yes I'm one of them, and hesitated, was it going to make me cry?

The frame: A poem written in 14 lines made up of a tercet, a quatrain, a tercet, a quatrain, in that order. A quatorzain, but not a sonnet, there is not pivot nor any apparent metric or syllabic pattern though it is rhymed. Rhyme scheme xaa bbcc ddx eeff x being unrhymed.

The rhythm is a little stocatto, language simple. Emotion, high, there is definitely a sadness at your loss.

I found this poem a sweet tribute to a dog who was obviously important to you.

Thank you for this read.

~~Tink


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