227Mastodons!

My friend! My kindred spirit! My fellow-reality-confronter! Wow! Truly, this is so raw and REAL. It conveys how damaging pride and ego truly is, and how much it hinders our ability to become the people we are meant to be— and connect with the people we were meant to bond with. Pride truly is the root of all evil— it causes us to stay unfulfilled in so many ways; it crushes our , closes open doors and opportunities, and barres us from the destiny we know we were meant to have. The fact that this poem could get through ALL of that TRUTH and meaning, in such a concise, and truly captivating and creative way, is so stunning to comprehend! I am gobstruck by your talent— by your DEPTH. Just… wow! I truly agree with you when you say that we are kindred spirits— we see the world and reality the same, and we aren’t afraid to confront it and write about it. I love knowing that I’m not alone in refusing to tip-toe around hard subjects like this!

You truly penned such an amazing, truly POWERFUL piece! I can’t wait to read more of your work! Thank you so much for reaching out, and sending me the link to this! You have truly inspired me to get past this writers block that has been plaguing me recently, so thank you so so much for that! You’ve motivated me to start writing more about my view on the world, and different forces and concepts that contribute to human behavior and affect the lives of every person.

Just… wow. I really am in awe of your mind. I hope you truly grasp how special and brave you are for being able to write something like this— something so RAW and GRITTY and REAL. Your courage and talent is something I really appreciate and hold in such high-esteem, as a fellow writer. Definitely expect me to scour through your profile and review some more of your work, this coming week! I look forward to connecting with you more! Please message me anytime!
Keep writing! Please never stop sharing your truth— the world needs you and your transparency!

In your corner forever,
~DestinyAwaitsDarling

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .