Hello Dr MC, I found your poem, Frozen Flame, at Read and Review and I am here to give you my thoughts.

I thought your title was intriguing and would draw readers. The presentation along with the original in Hindi was fascinating to see and to read the Roman translation (even though I don't understand, I can get a little idea of the sounds of the poem.)

The poem is written in 6 rhymed couplets made up of 7 syllable lines. Interesting that the original Hindi is in 7 couplets but the Roman translation and English translation are only 6 couplets.

This is lovely romantice piece. Reminiscent of the Ghazal.

I really enjoyed studying this piece. Thanks you.

~~Tink


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