Hi Steph, Congratulations on 2nd Place at Shadows and Light Poetry Contest Round 113. The poem is on the Review requested list and I'm here to share my thoughts.

First impression, the title, "Numb" is in my opinion unique and would attract this random reader.

This free verse poem reads fluidly. Strong line and stanza breaks, bringing importance to key words and thought units. Great imagery in L4,L5 & L6. The abstract lines of L7 & L8 and L12 and L13 are a little telly and difficult to connect to emotionally. In my opinion, your poem would be stronger without those lines. Of course, this is just one person's opinion. Use whatever you find helpful here and ignore the rest.

I love "Face to face with Poe."

Thanks you for this interesting read.

~~Tink

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .