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Proof  [E]
Looking at my hands, I think of my mother's.
by ALTA
Review of Proof  
Review by Tinker
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Alta, Your "Proof" came up on Read and Review and I am here to share my thoughts.

I like the title, it made me curious. Forgive me, I don't normally review prose so I am a little out of my element as to what to look for. But I will give it a shot.

The first sentence hooked me. The story evolves naturally from that point. There is a poignancy, the piece touched me as it moves to remember the mother's hands.

No technical writing errors jump out at me.

I really enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you.

~~Tink

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