Hi Alta, Your "Proof" came up on Read and Review and I am here to share my thoughts.

I like the title, it made me curious. Forgive me, I don't normally review prose so I am a little out of my element as to what to look for. But I will give it a shot.

The first sentence hooked me. The story evolves naturally from that point. There is a poignancy, the piece touched me as it moves to remember the mother's hands.

No technical writing errors jump out at me.

I really enjoyed reading this piece. Thank you.

~~Tink

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .