Hi Jace, Your "Questions" from 2005 popped up on Read and Review and I am here to share my thoughts.

First impression: I don't know if the title would draw me in as a random reader but it's OK, it fits the poem, and the appearance on the page would entice me as a random reader to read. It looks playful.

The Frame: Free verse, a kind of List Poem with outline structure.

The questions asked made me smile as they spiral into more and more questions. And of course your last line got a chuckle.

I see no technical errors jumping out at me and have nothing to offer in the way of improvement.

I really enjoyed reading this fun poem. Thank you.

~~Tink


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