Hi LeJenD, Your Sky Above, Earth Below from 2008, popped up on Read and Review and I am here to share my thoughts.

First impression, interesting title brief intro sounds intriguing. I think the random reader will be enticed to read.

The Frame, written in 5 staggered mono-rhymed quatrains with a refrain in L2 of each quatrain. Syllabic pattern 4-5-4-6 Rhyme scheme xAxa xAxa xAxa xAxa xAxa A being the refrain and x being unrhymed. The poem read with a nice rhythm.

The poem progresses through a lifetime of a woman, from birth to death. Fairly generic, no unique or surprise events noted. I'm sure there were lots but this poem was condensed to a generic "every-women".

I left this feeling like I'd love to know more of this woman. But it was a pleasant read.

Thank you. ~~Tink


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