Hi, AmyJo- only 2 steps behind - , I'm Prosperous Snow celebrating , I'm reviewing "To Arms!"  because I discovered it on the "Twenty-three in Eleven "  forum page.

First Thoughts: The rhythm of this free verse poem move the plot and emotions of homesickness forward at a good pace, while building the suspense.

Suggestions: I found no technical problems.

My favorite part: I like the way this poem looks on the page, because it helps focus the reader's attention.

Final Thought: I enjoyed reading this poem because of the theme and the speaker.