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Review #4696996
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These Are My JOTtings, Part #2  [E]
We live much of life amid unique choices. Joy is anchored in The One beyond our life.
by Jay O'Toole
         Review for entry/chapter: "Oriental Octet: "Changing Seasons"" 
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is a perfect Oriental Oclet. The poet touches on the peak of the perfection that he generally does. The originator James R. Gray requests theme of the poem should be in nature. The poet writes the poetry precisely following that direction. He also follows all other rules, too.
The narrator is within nature. Time is very crucial. When the Summer replaces the Winter. These are the perfect scenarios for describing those moments.
Extremely well done. I hope your creativity will entertain us endlessly.

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