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 Life and Death  [E]
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Review of Life and Death  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What a splendid poem it is! The poet significantly describes here the difference between life and death. We are always running behind goals like a machine. Many obstructions may come our way. We have to combat them. Otherwise, our survival will be difficult. To run behind the target, we often ignore the bliss. At that moment, we die.
What a perfect analysis of our life!
Keep writing!

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