Very funny story. I enjoyed reading it very much. I did find some minor grammar issues, though.

First of all, I see several spots missing spaces after commas. 'Sharon,if you do' is one example of this issue. Adding those spaces will improve the readability of your story.

Secondly, there should be a comma before Tiffany in the following spot. 'her boss Tiffany,who' In this case, the boss's name is considered extra information. It allows you to just refer to her by name in the rest of the story, but the sentence is a complete thought without the name.

Lastly, there should be an 's' on the end of friend in the following location. 'her secretary's best friend Bernadette and Anna' In this sentence, you are naming two people as someone's best friend.

Hopefully, these grammar corrections will improve your story. Thank you very much for sharing it.

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