Good morning!

Your poem is well written and vividly describes the natural event of sunset.

Your poem has one stanza (which I think could be divided into two stanzas) and deals with the sun and its path across the sky. It rhymes.

Unfortunately, the title didn't quite manage to arouse my interest. The first two verses "The sun has been set free,
shining upon the ground" succeed in doing so. That's why I would change the title to "The sun has been set free" or "Shining upon the ground", for example.

Your choice of words is interesting, but good.

I would like you to divide the verse so that there are two verses. You could also change the size of the stanza to make it easier to read.

Best regards,
Evie