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 Birth of Apollo and Artemis  [E]
This is the myth of Apollo and Artemis put simply
by Coco
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is an exciting short story. All characteristics of an ideal short tale have been there.
Though, there are a few characters in this story. All are either God or Goddess. But lust and greediness are also there.
Goddess Hera tries to stop the birth of Apollo and Artemis, but it remains unsuccessful. Every sufficient effort must win as ever-kind God protects them. Despite this, they may be delayed.
Sound writing skills perform.
Keep writing.
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