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 haiku (a fawns day)  [E]
A 5-7-5 haiku
by jamisonbrown
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What a traditional Japanese Haiku it is! It fulfils all the necessary characteristics which a conventional Japanese Haiku should have. In this Haiku, the poet draws a perfect and exciting image of the forest that is part of mother nature.
Good beginning. Keep writing.

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