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Review #4702764
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 Freefall -not finished -  [13+]
A poem about a man wishing his life had been different. - not finished -
by Sean M. H. Delaplace
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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The poem comes from our real-life experiences. It is a poem about a person who can wish differently in self-life. The world surrounding that human is full of endless lust. That stage is continued until death. This is the tragedy of our life. We sacrifice many little blisses for an impossible goal.
The poet observed the harmful effect of this burning issue on our society and for creating consciousness in time.
I hope you will entertain in future endlessly.

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