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Review #4703794
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 They Are Perfect  [18+]
10 minute comedy
by Jim Binz
Review of They Are Perfect  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It is an excellent little drama script but strictly written for adult readers. There are only two characters- Joe and Pam. A few dialogues between them are only the source of the story. This drama is based on a comedy scene, but the subject is serious.
We, the people of the modern era, often do indisciplined activities. We do not feel ashamed of those. Joe is a Boy Scout. They generally maintain a disciplined lifestyle. He does an indecent attitude with Pam. Without taking any severe action, Pam rectifies him through some conversations.
That is an ideal script for the tiny audio drama.
It is a positive beginning. Go ahead.
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