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The Kiss  [18+]
An edited story of the best kiss I ever witnessed. For Sensual MomentsRound 22
by Joey's Spring has Sprung
Review of The Kiss  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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It is a perfect short story. There is no doubt about it. But, the story is strictly written for adult readers. The scenes are very much lively. But some of them are not required. Those hamper the pace of the story once or twice. Please, rectify those. It will be a fantastic short story.
Write on!

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