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 Observations  [13+]
Do you ever wonder what the person you love does when you're not around?
by cherry
Review of Observations  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Wow! It is a fantastic poem of love. At the time of birth, we know that we will die one day. Do you ever think about what will happen on your person in your loved person when you are not around? That relationship carries a lot of sweet remembrances, which will recall your life partner with tears. You can not feel well with these thoughts. But it is a bitter truth.
It is an excellent beginning. Keep writing.
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