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Chronos  [E]
You don’t tell time, time tells you. — Chumbawamba
by Anni Pon
Review of Chronos  
Review by WriterRick
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This poem is an intriguing exploration of the concept of time, symbolized through the metaphor of the unyielding, relentless "clock." The piece brims with profound reflections and observations, embodying an anthropomorphic view of time that engages the reader to consider its impact on all aspects of life.

The poem's structure is compelling and the consistent use of "Tick" and "Tock" enhances the rhythm of the piece, simulating the steady ticking of a clock. This adds a sense of urgency and consistency that contributes to the overall theme.

The poem has a fluid progression. It starts by introducing time as an ever-patient, ever-punctual entity, "He has never been late, Or wrong, Infinitely patient". The second and third stanzas depict time as a non-stop force in relentless motion, not discriminative between speed - "How quickly he flies, How slowly he walks".

The fourth and fifth stanzas add a darker shade to the representation of time, attributing it with the qualities of a trickster and a murderer, the sole divider between life and death. It underlines the paradoxical nature of time, while also acknowledging its power in healing, "He heals all, Eventually".

The sixth and seventh stanzas further consolidate the omnipresence and omnipotence of time. It presents the chilling realization that time makes everything, even the reader, insignificant in the grand scheme of things - a reminder of our fleeting existence in the cosmos.

In terms of language and style, the poem is imbued with a strong rhythm and a significant amount of repetition, which gives it an incantatory quality. The poet uses straightforward language to express complex ideas, and the absence of rhyme in the stanzas adds to the tension and uncertainty that time often incites.

The metaphor of the clock is masterfully executed, and the poem successfully conveys the profound influence of time on our lives. It is a stark reminder of the inexorable march of time and our submission to it - "Living or not, All answer to the clock".

Overall, the poem is a thought-provoking contemplation of time that is both sobering and enlightening. Its strength lies in its simplicity, its thoughtful execution, and its ability to incite reflection.

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