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 The Train  [E]
A boy and a train
by Lorelei
Review of The Train  
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is indeed a fantastic Flash Fiction. All possible characteristics are covered. Though the boy is a central character, his brother also plays an important role. We can not deny the importance of the train, too. That train determines the fate of the story. The pace of the story is appreciably fast. Overall, a brilliant performance. Keep writing.

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