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Review #4706540
Viewing a review of:
Jots and Tittles and other Random Things  [13+]
Just things that I think about now and then.
by AmyJo- only 2 steps behind -
         Review for entry/chapter: "Express W/in 40 - 8/5 "beauty" WC -35
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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It is indeed a beautiful creation. What is genuine beauty? That answer is given here in this tiny poem.
In this poetry, the narrator's mother can be treated as an ideal parent. So she taught the teller what actual beauty was. The inner beauty is the true beauty.
I like those lines:-
"It's not the outside
But what's inside that matters."

It is a brilliant creation. I hope your creativity will entertain us endlessly.

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