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 Review #4706777 |
 | The End  [13+] Flash Fiction about the end of the world and missed opportunities  |
| (4.5)| Hello Horror Scribe  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    It's amazing how much of a full story one can achieve in a flash fiction piece. You did a great job.  Title and Description - The title drew my attention and the description pulled me in. We all have things we wished we would have done or done differently while looking back. Or in this case, looking forward to a future not allowed to be. Theme/Subject Matter:- It's the end of the world. And it's brought on by the careless actions of those now facing the consequences. Now, facing death, they realize life wasn't so bad after all. As a matter of fact, it was pretty good. Ah, hindsight. Characters - The main character telling the story is portrayed nicely. His emotions, sadness and regrets are quite prevalent.  Originality/Creativity:- A good creative ending and point of view, in a familiar story line. Emotion/Impact: - The emotions come across strongly and nicely. My Suggestions - Good job in a flash fiction story. It would flesh out nicely for a longer story also.  My Favorite Part: - The ending. It's poignant and leaves the reader thinking. Summary: I enjoyed it. Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us.   KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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