Great personification of a mirror watching a little girl grow up! Definitely worthy of its ribbon.
Title and Description - Perfect title and description of this story. They drew me in to want to read on.
Theme/Subject Matter:-Subject matter that one hopes to never have to deal with, but in some shape or form, we usually do. This is an interesting take on the lonely life of a teenage girl whose parents keep all too isolated supposedly for her own good. What they don't seem to realize, is it's slowly killing her. Draining away her will to live.
Characters -Great job in such a few words of showing us not only who the teenager is now, but the lively and happy child she was while growing up.
Originality/Creativity:-Very creative. You did an excellent job.
Setting -Perfect setting for personification story of watching a little girl grow.
Emotion/Impact: - The story touches at the readers heartstrings. You want to be able to yell and shake the parents to the point that they'll actually open their eyes, and see what they're doing to their teenage girl.
My Favorite Part: -The whole story is well done, but my favorite part has to be the opening paragraph. It's such a creative, strong, pull and keep you reading paragraph! Nicely done!
Summary:I truly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
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Great personification of a mirror watching a little girl grow up! Definitely worthy of its ribbon. 
Title and Description - Perfect title and description of this story. They drew me in to want to read on.
Theme/Subject Matter:-Subject matter that one hopes to never have to deal with, but in some shape or form, we usually do. This is an interesting take on the lonely life of a teenage girl whose parents keep all too isolated supposedly for her own good. What they don't seem to realize, is it's slowly killing her. Draining away her will to live. 
Characters -Great job in such a few words of showing us not only who the teenager is now, but the lively and happy child she was while growing up.
Originality/Creativity:-Very creative. You did an excellent job.
Setting -Perfect setting for personification story of watching a little girl grow.
Emotion/Impact: - The story touches at the readers heartstrings. You want to be able to yell and shake the parents to the point that they'll actually open their eyes, and see what they're doing to their teenage girl.
My Favorite Part: -The whole story is well done, but my favorite part has to be the opening paragraph. It's such a creative, strong, pull and keep you reading paragraph! Nicely done! 
Summary:I truly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
KEEP ON WRITING ON! 
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