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Review #4708552
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 Summer Will Drag-on  [E]
A poem based off a really bad pun.
by Massive Friendly Derg
Review by intuey
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Reading* A Cute poem that made me chuckle. *Delight*

*Balloon2* Title and Description - Your title is perfect for this great play on words and drew my attention. Though, for your description, I think it sales your poem short. I'd change it to include what readers can expect. Something similar to 'A Comedic Look at a Drag-on's Dog Days of Summer. It may help draw more people in to read your piece.

*Penr* Theme/Subject Matter:-Great subject matter for the play on words writing.

*Flower1* Characters - Nicely written. The reader easily gets to know the personality of the dragon they're reading about. *Cool*

*Penb*Originality/Creativity:- Very original and creative, funny piece.

*Balloon4* Setting - Perfect setting for the writing. I was able to easily visualize each scene.

*Penv*My Favorite Part: -The last three lines. Nice!

*Peng*Summary: Thank you for the smile and chuckle. I enjoyed reading your poem.

*Quill* KEEP ON WRITING ON! *Quill*

*Heart* Tracey

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