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 Review #4708693 |
  |  | a Dream deferred  [18+] In the blink of an eye, everything changed.  |
| (5.0)| Hello iKïyå§ama This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   Wow! My heart literally broke for you. It's bad enough to round ya'll up like a bunch of cattle, and send you home. But to actually keep you all locked up in a jail setting is ridiculous and shameful. Especially when you have been a good citizen, made something of yourself, and been here for so long.   Title and Description - Perfect title that drew me in, and the description definitely made me want to read on. Theme/Subject Matter:- The injustice that was done to many of the immigrants living legally in the U.S when the law abruptly changed. Characters - A nonfiction look at one person's experience. How it affected them, and others they met along the way. And the act of changing the way they thought of the future, in order to bring hope back into their life. Setting - You did an excellent job helping the reader visualize the scenery all throughout the experience. Emotion/Impact: - It left a strong impact on me. I felt sad and ashamed that my country handled immigrants who had made a life here for so many years, treated so cruelly. Summary: I remember when you had to leave the U.S. Well, I remember when you wrote that you were back in Nigeria. I had no idea you went through all of this.   I hope life has been good to you, and that you have found new happiness, hope, and a bright future.  Thanks for sharing this very emotional time in your life with us.   KEEP ON WRITING ON! Tracey  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 08/28/2023 @ 12:09pm EDT