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 | All I Ever  [E] Personal. With an open heart and mind I've asked.  |
| (4.5)| Hello Wandering Thoughts Happy WDC 23rd Birthday! This is a review on behalf of "Angel Review Forum" [ASR] This is only my views. Please use or discard as you're comfortable with.   This is a beautiful prayer. Offered by someone only searching for and giving love. The ultimate gift. Reminded the reader that no matter who we are, or the station we hold in life, we're all headed for that day when we will take our last breath.  Title and Description - Great title that caught my attention. The description piqued my curiosity and made me want to read on. Theme/Subject Matter:- It's a prayer to God from someone who has always given themselves unselfishly, only ever searching for love. They remind the reader to be at peace with who you are because what you have will not matter in the end. Love is truly the only thing that matters. Originality/Creativity:- It's an original writing. A psalm of sorts from the writer. Emotion/Impact: - It gives a nice, positive impact. And spreads an important, hopeful message. My Suggestions - I only have a few minor suggestions: principalsprinciples  the people collapsecollapses  My Favorite Part: -Lives are the coins that are sadly sacrificedWhen the people forget to cherish each other Building walls out of hate collapse in time All I ever worked for was love.  Summary:Thank you so much for sharing this with us. It's truly beautiful writing, and I really enjoyed it.  KEEP ON WRITING ON!  Intuey   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 09/05/2023 @ 7:02pm EDT