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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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In this chapter, Sylvia is the key character. There is no doubt about it. Joseph plays a supportive role. But Zack entered into the story in the previous chapter. In this chapter, he also plays a significant role.
In this part of the story, Sylvia clears her purpose. She prefers a permanent cure rather than a treatment. In her opinion, there is nothing is incurable. Just need accurate information about the inside part of the body which is done, Hon.
It is very much inspiring for us. Carry on as it is, This is my only suggestion.
We are eagerly waiting for the incoming chapters.
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