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 Free will   [E]
God's love and free will
by Delia
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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For Delia, aka dells, my review of "Free will " :

The essay "God's Love And Free Will" presents a personal testimony that effectively illustrates the connection between religious tenets and individual decision-making. The writer's emotional reaction in the movie theater, triggered by a scene about free will, demonstrates the power of personal experiences in guiding our choices. This essay rightly highlights the importance of free will as a demonstration of God's love, allowing individuals to make genuine choices rather than mere obligations.

The writer effectively emphasizes the idea that we live through experiences to help us shape our decisions. Their realization in the movie theater that they had a choice to continue watching or leave is a poignant example of this. By deciding to leave and later checking a movie review, they made an informed choice that aligns with their values.

However, there's room for improvement in the essay. To make it more comprehensive, you could provide additional examples of how free will plays out in daily life or in more significant moral dilemmas. Expanding on this could strengthen their argument. Additionally, it would be beneficial to delve deeper into the dangers of close-mindedness in today's society, explaining how it can hinder personal growth and unity. Providing specific examples of such close-mindedness could make this point more impactful.

In conclusion, the essay effectively conveys the idea that free will is a demonstration of God's love and the importance of making informed choices based on personal experiences. By incorporating more examples and elaborating on the dangers of close-mindedness, it could become an even more compelling and thought-provoking piece.

Keep writing and experiencing life,

Brian
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