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 The Paradox  [E]
The Paradox of Love...
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Review of The Paradox  
Review by Brian KC
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Rated: E | (4.0)
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My examination of "The Paradox"  and questions I have about this writers thesis. Is the author suggesting we use others to hurt ourselves rather than be alone in an emotionless existence, how possible to set aside feelings of love to be calculated? I offer the short statements that were presented:

‘The Paradox

The world weighs upon thought and its extreme ignorance. Ignorance, to create a love for a magnanimity of such, is greater than to surrender oneself into eternal extinction. To adore the one, regretting adulation, desiring presence, and, ultimately, to venture unto dimensions of a sadness of depressive sources, is the fundamental condition of the paradox. Paradoxical distinctions are the production of thus emotive effect... To love an unreturned love, my resolution is the diminishment of alternative emotion, and, fundamentally, reduction and redundancy of the principal reason for defection.’

This presents a complex and somewhat abstract thesis that revolves around the idea of emotional paradoxes and impact on human existence. it’s argued embracing extreme ignorance, which can lead to emotional pain and regret, is a greater experience than surrendering to emotional numbness and extinction.

Valid Points:
Emotional Paradox: The author makes a valid point about the existence of emotional paradoxes. These involve the coexistence of conflicting emotions, such as loving someone who doesn't return that love, which can lead to profound internal struggles. We often lose ourselves the more we give in…leading to things such as abusive relationships, co-dependency, lack of self-love.

The Regret and Sadness: The thesis touches upon the idea that embracing emotional complexity, even when it leads to regret and sadness, can be a more genuine and profound way of experiencing life. It suggests that the depth of feeling, even if painful, is a more valuable human experience than emotional detachment. However, this stimulus need produce a positive result, to move away from pain, I say.

Impact on Decision-Making: This suggests that paradoxical emotions can impact one's decision-making and lead to a reduction in alternative emotions. This can be seen as an acknowledgment that complex emotions can influence human behavior.

Suggestions:
However, this piece could benefit from more clarity and specificity in its argument. It leaves some questions unanswered, such as whether the author is advocating for a life devoid of emotions or whether emotional complexity and paradoxes should be embraced. Additionally, the thesis touches on the notion of "defection," but it's not entirely clear what this refers to in the context of the argument.

Further:
The idea of embracing emotional complexity and paradoxes is not necessarily advocating for an emotionless existence but rather exploring the depth of human emotions. It doesn't necessarily suggest that emotional numbness is preferable. However, the thesis could be strengthened by providing concrete examples or scenarios to illustrate the points being made.

Where are the examples to support this? It’s opinion, but could a reader have evidence to chew upon? I brought my own experience to the table, to think how this applies. Definitely need more to convince your audience with supportive facts.

In conclusion, "The Paradox" presents an abstract exploration of emotional paradoxes and their impact on human existence. While it raises valid points about the depth of emotions and their complexities, it could benefit from additional clarity and specificity to enhance the argument's persuasiveness and comprehension.

Brian
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