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Review #4713084
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 Tears  [E]
Just ... tears
by fyn
Review of Tears  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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I could see you sitting at your desk, the tears running down your cheeks and falling onto your desk. My guess is sometimes people get overwhelmed with life and simply need to let it all out. Knowing you have a special person to be with you during this challenge and others was a relief. I'm glad you are not completely alone.

The tears [of] your cheeks should be [off] or depending on the structure of your poem story running down your cheeks.

Biographical as a genre for your poem would apply because it is about you, drama genre would work for this dramatic piece, experience because it is your experience written about in the poem, friendship because of your friend/person, and possibly some other genre. Having all three categories will help readers find your poem when the search WdC for something to read.


Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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