I could feel the love and respect for He who makes these things in your poem possible. It is a positive story of grace and mercy which uplifts my heart. I'm glad I found your item because it made me feel happy. I can relate to your words as I also have sat still and pondered these special things.

..spirit [dwells] would work better and be smoother to read.

when you use [gave] you are to my understanding saying He is no longer giving, right or do you mean [gives] as continually giving?

In your last line, you have a space between the word and the comma.

Also, In your last line; it would be easier to read by changing [desire] to [desires]

I'm not sure what you are writing in the last part of the sentence. Do you mean [praise] and [reverence] is what He asks from us?

Thank you for writing and for sharing your word art with me and WdC members.

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