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 Stephen Curry : The greatest shooter  [E]
Stephen Curry.
by curry-30
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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It is indeed a fantastic essay. How did he grow up as a legendary basketball player? That is described here in this writing effort.
In childhood, he got a favourable environment to be a player. As his parents were professional players. So, he got moral boosts from his family to be a player. His school made him a non-regular player. So, for the sake of his career, he took admission to a low-graded college where he started to get the regular chance and become a legendary basketball player.
That proves that if you have true desires in your heart, no hurdle can obstruct your dream run.
The author uses the simplest words to express that. This is the prime beauty of this writing.
Despite a fantastic essay, I must point out a fault.
In the beginning, you do not utilise the subject column. It is where the author describes the purpose of writing but within 90 characters. Just rectify that shortcoming, and it will be an unparalleled essay.
A suggestion for you, too. Try to maintain these types of easiest languages that will help you to knock on the door of our hearts.
It is a very bright beginning. Go ahead.


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