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Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Wow! What an exciting chapter it is! The style of the beginning of the episode creates an example before us. That is full of suspense.
In this part of the story, Sylvia meets with her family members and friends over the phone. So, a few emotional thoughts are there that make the conversations lively and attractive.
But, the Godly image of Sylvia also remains intact. Especially, when Glenn intimates that Eugene wins over the cancer due to Sylvia. Though Sylvia wishes all credit would go to God.
It is a compact chapter. There is no doubt about it.
My humble suggestion is to please maintain that classic rhythm to entertain us.
But, what will happen next? We can not predict that. So we are eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters.

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