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 What's Behind Me?  [13+]
A spoof on the cliché.
by BIG BAD WOLF is hopping
Review of What's Behind Me?  
Review by Beholden
In affiliation with WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Well, this is a bit of fun. You even had me laughing when the werewolf popped out from behind Steve to say, "No I'm not." It turned into a real party near the end and even had a couple of late guests.

I did find one little niggle that is going to take a few seconds to fix. Jessie starts out as Jesse before she settles for being Jessie (a far more suitable name, I think). Otherwise I find it to be a well written example of its genre (I prefer comedy horror to the real thing anyway), especially as it's genuinely funny. And that's really hard to do in print.

Altogether, it's a tight, well written comedy horror piece without serious error. You even put an acute accent on the E of cliché!

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