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Review #4714549
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 Thought of the Day  [E]
A little daily tidbit to get your day started
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         Review for entry/chapter: " Running with Cars" 
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
In affiliation with The Poet's Place  
Rated: E | (5.0)
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This is indeed the thought of the day. It is the thinking of an experienced person who sees a lot. Only that person can realise that.
In our lives, we set a target in our life. To achieve that goal, we run behind that. We ignore little blisses in the way of our lives. We have to combat a lot of obstructions to get it. We become too tired. But we forget the timing of how and when to stop. We set another goal. Our running behind the target is going on until the last breathing. We realise at dask of our lives that we did wrong by ignoring those blissful moments. But it is too late to feel that truth.
Here, the car is a symbol of the goals. It is a very thoughtful. The feeling of whole life is very prominently expressed beautifully here in a couplet! It is truly an extraordinary performance. I hope your creativity will continue in future, too.

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