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 Prime Rhetoric - Advocacy and Fortitude  [E]
The difference in personal performance and persistence - merit and cadence - a poem.
by Tim Chiu
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Wow! What a brilliant poem is poem it is! This poetry tells us the truth of real life.
The poet always wants to see a well-balanced society. But that does not happen every time. The pen becomes the strongest weapon to protest those.
That is applied perfectly in this poem. We often choose the wrong way to fulfil our desires. That should not be done. We ignore the small blisses for the sake of a big deal. In this way, we do not get proper peace. Time is very cruel. Once he passed away, he will never return.
So utilize the moment appropriately.
It is a thoughtful creation. I hope to see many attractive creations like this one.


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