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 A Poem about my Mom  [E]
A poem I did a bit ago for school with a few edits.
by poetic dreams
Review by Past Member 'rupali'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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The poem is a brilliant tribute to the narrator's mother. It is written from the poet's personal experiences. So it becomes such lively.
The teller's mother is an exceptional and kind-hearted lady. She always takes care of her children. Even she does her best when somebody needs her help. So everybody respects her. She also hugs them when someone is in deep trouble.
Overall her saintly appearance gives us a feeling of comfort and respect. Therefore, the narrator feels proud of the self-mother which is expressed here nicely.
The rhythm sense of the poet is also admirable.
It is a nice beginning. Keep writing.


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