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The Pencil  [E]
Save the pencil!
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Review of The Pencil  
Review by Monty
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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It is surely all you say a pencil is. Mine often grow short as they always have for the years I have been useing them I find the eraser saves paper over the ball point. In 1946 through 1958 I saw things change, still I kept my pencil. The imagery of this write has got me going but even re-reading and enjoying the words I cannot find much rhythm. Surely hope they don't become obsolete. *Smile*
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