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There is Love  [E]
Revised version of original poem titled "Chill" Poem #1A
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Review of There is Love  
Review by Monty
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First I will say I like your catching the title in the last line and next I will say this poem fits my morning very well. No spring to look for but the look at winter fits.
I had 23 degrees with a wind chill of 9. The imagery is strong and easily seen. All I have to do is look out the window. There is rhythm in the write. I noted no errors.
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