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 Anger  [E]
How does anger and its aftermath feel?
by Milhaud - Long Tail
Review of Anger  
Review by Brian KC
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*BalloonO* Happy WDC Anniversary Milhaud - Long Tail , *BalloonV*

Upon delving into the depths of "Anger," the stark simplicity of its title sets the tone for a journey into the tumultuous terrain of human emotion. The use of ellipses after the word "Anger" creates a pregnant pause, a breath held in anticipation, foreshadowing the intensity that unfolds in the subsequent lines. The brevity of these lines, combined with the strategic use of spacing, amplifies the emotional weight, drawing the reader into the visceral experience of anger.

The style of your poem exhibits a striking contrast, mirroring the turbulent nature of the emotion it explores. The initial lines employ vivid imagery, portraying anger as a descent into a dark abyss. The alliteration in "dark and roiling" intensifies the turbulence, while the repetition of short, staccato phrases in "a plunge downward," "a light sucking," and "disappearing act" creates a sense of relentless descent, mirroring the suffocating grip of anger.

Thematically, your poem masterfully navigates the turbulent journey from anger to liberation. The imagery of "leaden limbs" and "anchor weight" vividly conveys the physical and emotional burden of anger, anchoring the reader in the oppressive depths of this emotion. However, the turning point, marked by the gentle imagery of a "twirling kitten's tail" and the liberating ascent propelled by positive experiences, introduces a nuanced perspective on anger. The contrast between the oppressive descent and the featherlight ascension captures the transformative power of positive moments in overcoming anger.

Poetic devices play a pivotal role in shaping the emotional landscape of your poem. The metaphorical use of a "black hole" as a representation of anger is particularly poignant. It encapsulates the all-consuming, seemingly inescapable nature of this emotion. The juxtaposition of the "hateful mud-sucker" further personifies anger, portraying it as a malevolent force clinging to one's being. This vivid imagery serves to evoke a visceral response, immersing this reader to acknowledge the emotional turbulence described.

One suggestion to enhance the thematic depth is to explore the aftermath of anger's dissipation. Perhaps, if the poet has time to reconsider, delve into the lingering effects or the process of healing, offering a more comprehensive exploration of the emotional journey. This could provide a more rounded narrative to complement the powerful depiction of anger and liberation. Readers often enjoy resolution in a poem that heads in this direction, right after the described conflict.

In conclusion, "Anger" is a visceral exploration of the tumultuous emotional landscape, skillfully navigating the descent into anger and the subsequent ascent to bliss. Should you revisit, expanding on the aftermath of anger for a more comprehensive narrative can give completion, but overall, your poem resonates with evocative imagery and emotional intensity. It was a pleasure to discover and consider for feedback. Have a great WDC Account Anniversary month…almost over.

Sincerely,

Brian
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Mudsucker. Good expression. Still resonates.

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