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 "Irony, O Irony..." an elegy by Kwoa  [E]
To dearest Irony, swallowed by instant thinking, marketability, and political correctness.
by Max Kwoa
Review by Brian KC
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hello Max Kwoa,

"Irony, O Irony..." unfolds as a poignant elegy that delicately navigates the complex emotions surrounding loss, while also addressing societal shifts. The opening lines, "Mellow fumes of incense waltzing above your grave, Barely soothe myriads of senses all so livid," evoke a vivid atmosphere, using sensory imagery to immerse the reader in the grieving process. The choice of "livid" adds a layer of intensity, reflecting the emotional turmoil provoked by the perceived indignity of Irony's demise.

Your style in this elegy is distinctive, combining elegance with a touch of lamentation. The repetition of "Mellow fumes of incense waltzing" serves as a melancholic refrain, emphasizing the ritualistic aspect of mourning. The poem's tone oscillates between reverence and frustration, mirroring the conflicting emotions tied to the departure of a cherished concept. The deliberate use of enjambment, as seen in "Enraged by the ignominy of your passing," propels the reader forward, heightening the emotional impact of each line.

The theme of intellectual resilience against societal norms emerges as a focal point. The lines, "Deterring pompous arrogance defined your quest; Glorious battles facing bored minds all so rigid," reflect a nuanced critique of conformity and the intellectual battles Irony faced. The elegy suggests that Irony served as a guardian against the stifling nature of conventional thinking. The juxtaposition of "pompous arrogance" and "bored minds" highlights the societal forces that sought to undermine the essence of Irony.

In terms of poetic devices, the use of alliteration in "Glorious battles facing bored minds" enhances the musicality of the verse while underscoring the conflict between intellectual vigor and complacency. The repetition of the word "passing" in the closing lines creates a poignant echo, emphasizing the finality of Irony's departure. Additionally, the clever incorporation of contemporary elements like "wifi" adds a layer of relevance, subtly commenting on the contemporary challenges faced by nuanced discourse in a technologically driven world.

As a suggestion, consider exploring the impact of Irony's absence on the broader cultural landscape. How does society grapple with the void left by a concept that once served as a check against superficial thinking? Expanding on these societal repercussions could deepen the elegy's thematic exploration.

I enjoying experiencing this poem, to give thought and lend my feedback.

Sincerely,

Brian
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