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 |  | Hope Springs Eternal  [ASR] Dedicated to those who perished at the World Trade Center on September 11, 2001.  |
| (5.0)| A WDC Power Review Hi Davy Kraken .I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Hope Springs Eternal" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. I've created a double acrostic of my own, so I know just how difficult this endeavor can be. Well done! I really enjoyed your subject--September Eleventh. Every line speaks to the topic perfectly. I loved the use of color The rainbow speaks to the hope that one needs knowing things will get better. Arguably the most serious incident in recent times, your poem speaks of both the horror we experienced and the courage in response. It expresses the resilience of everyday people.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. Nothing to improve in this area.  My Rating. 5.0.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.
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