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 Dishes  [E]
A poem I came up with after finishing my chore faster than I usually do
by MayDay
Review of Dishes  
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hi MayDay .

I'm JACE - House Targaryen , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Dishes" .

I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.

*Note1* Overall Impression. Short, sweet and to the point. Your offering has hit the nail on the head. I can't say how many times I've railed against doing something I didn't wish to do. Time spent doing this ... or that, but never the thing that needed to be done.

Perhaps it's a rite of passage. It's something that has to be learned ... like patience. Or some other aspect that turns us from children into adults.

Then again, maybe we never really learn that lesson. I've found myself, even today in my late 60s, railing against what I need to do. Eventually I accept the inevitable, as we all do.

*Exclaim* Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc.

         *Bullet* I have nothing to report in this section. Well done.    

*Star* My Rating.  5.0. 

*Heart* Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.


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